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Love in Two Places
By: Jacoby Brown

Topics: Poetry, Love, teen crush
Posted by Jacoby Wed Oct 22, 2008 12:22:30 PDT
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Have you ever had a crush on someone then let it slip?

  Well I have and I know that I'm regretting it. I'm only in high school and I know you are not thinking i could possibly have had an experience like this. But I have.

  And I will tell you about it. She has blue eyes that look like the world's greatest sunset upon the ocean, she has a smile that would melt any man that looks upon it. Her personality is not like any other it's one of a kind.

 She walks about us every day and as you pass her you would never know you just walked by the sweetest girl in the world. As the Greeks would say, "She is a goddess in a mortal body to confuse the ignorant and make the men think more wisely about what they do next instead of just reacting on instinct." She makes you feel in ways man has never felt before and hurt in the heart more times than ever thought possible. 

   She is real but it's a one-in-a-million chance of feeling this way about someone at my age — of which most of you have passed. But there is always hope and I hope as the author of this that you go home to your wife, girlfriend or relative and you look upon them and smile and feel the same way you did when you first fell in love. You might read this and she or he will listen — I promise they will. And for that one second you'll know you're no longer in two places.

 

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